magazine article commentary

this article is about the life and day of a parents routine, in this case my mums. i talked about the daily routine that she has to go through adding bits of her life and sometimes how she got into the routine she's in now, also i might be changing them piece to a different perspective of an adults routine and what they do during the day.

the audience is an older group mainly striked as slight entertainment to other parents to let them know what other parents do, also they could think to themselves "ah i do that too" so it appears to their nature and perspective of an adults day.

the purpose of this piece is to inform other parents about a parents daily routine everyday also it is to entertain other adults as they would have a lot in common with this piece making it easier to read for most adults. also it makes the reader feel like theyre having a conversation with the adult (my mum) and almost like theyre getting to know someone which also can be shown as entertainment in a way.

i set the article out down a staright path in the middle this makes it look more like an article and keeps the reader centered and concentrating on the text. this also makes the text look a lot more formal which in this case will appeal to the adults and elders who are reading it more, this will keep them entertained and at a full understandinhg at all times, which will be more appealing in the long run.

the register is standard to formal english as it is a long tabloid article about someones life and daily routine which in this case will appeal to the elders and adults and mainly parents as it is based on an adults day and life. also most people reading this kind of article will speak quite standard and formal english which makes it more smart and equally understandable than if it was in slang or common idiolect.

the title of the piece is large and bold to come through to people what exactly the article is about and this will either attract or send people away but seeing as most adults and parents read the news they will be attracted to this article just because of the title even thought there are no pictures which also appeals to adults and elders.