review commentary

In my review i tried to create the voice of an Essex lad having a meal in Brentwood harvester. i used the language and essence to create a more realistic and virtuous voice which made the review sound better. i also started with a view of what the look and feel of the place was like when i was there.
This text was made to give people an insight on a specific restaurant in this case its the harvester

I used graphology with a picture of the harvester sign, this instantly tells the reader about what the review was about. also i used the ministry of food logo to show what magazine i'm writing in this made the piece look professional and real.

When i talked about how the restaurant was i gave a lot of description about everything i did or any events that happened in the restaurant, this keeps the reader interested and allows them to feel like they are there with me at every moment. I used a certain choice of lexis when describing the food and how it was, some of these words were "divine" and "exquisite" these words are extreme for describing food but the use of hyperbole makes the food seem a lot better than it actually is, this is good for a food review as the point of a food review is to say how good or bad the food and service was so if i'm saying how good it was i would use these words to get the food across as being the best anywhere.