travel wriing commentary

in my travel writing i created the sense of a diary or a journal of my trip to tunisia which is mainly for entertainment but can be used as info on whether or not to go there. i set it out as day 1 to day 3 as each section is quite long but everything is my actual experience but dramatised for the entertainment. i spoke in standard english a sit can be for formal people and non formal but its mainly for entertainment.

i used a lot of negative lexis choices with words like frustration and dilemma to show the negativity towards the trip in the first place. also this shows how me in the text was rushing around and getting annoyed with the situation i was handed by myself. i also used a bit of sarcasm "oh what a joy" this showed how me in the text felt but also it adds a bit of fun and entertainment for the reader. i used a lot of first person pronouns to relay the story back to me and to show that this was how i felt and what bhappened to me as its a diary its like my thouights and thaat im thinking this to myself.

with the title i didnt do much with it but the short and snappy "my trip to tunisia" gets staright to the point in telling the reader what the text is going to be about which might get peoples attention. also i bolded the "day 1" to section out the different days in the diary/journal this added a sense of it being a real diary which adds to the context.

i used very little phonology in this text as it was not needed but i used it when on the plane "bang!" this helped me portray the sound easiest also the use of onimatopeia is seen in many comics and cartoon movies which not only refers back to entertainment it also appeals to teenagers and young adults.

i used a semantic value of negativity in this journal/diary entry as it showed my frustration on the morning of my flight and it also shows how annoying and exhausting travelling abroad and holidays can be.